Darkness sets like squeezed shut eyes
Sadness, like when the man forgets my curly fries
Comes back with onions and special sauce.
I wear this pain like a tortured man on his cross.
The milkshake is vanilla not mocha, man!
I start to cry into my black nailed hands.
Is it so hard to get the order right?
I want my shake like my face that is pale and white.
Kill me now, as I pull away
$9.28 was the price of my dismay.
emo fastfood pain sadness
June 15th, 2007 at 4:52 pm
Dude, that was so beautiful! It mad my eye liner run therefore I cut myself. Keep up the deep poems.
June 22nd, 2007 at 8:45 am
Man, I cried the entire time I read this. Thanks for being a beacon in the darkness of my life. I need to cut myself now.
June 22nd, 2007 at 10:45 am
What’s the deal with the wack rhyming? Just because it’s poetry doesn’t mean you have to rhyme. Remember, this is the art of detail, everything either needs a purpose in a poem. Rhyme just makes this corny (especially couplets).
June 22nd, 2007 at 11:28 am
Shawn, you should be an English teacher when you grow up. Then everyone can hate you more than they do already.
June 22nd, 2007 at 1:02 pm
These comments are way too funny and I sincerely hope the poem was written tongue-in-cheek. I love these! Let’s go cut ourselves and throw up!
Tee Hee. Dark, happy place! Smile, love, suffer well!
June 22nd, 2007 at 2:16 pm
Shawn, you need to lay off. poetry is free expression, not good impression. so shut your face poser.
June 23rd, 2007 at 11:16 am
your poem makes me weep a thousand tears of the pain i feel every time i am dragged to mcdonalds
June 25th, 2007 at 9:35 am
ROFL! THIS SITE IS A FREKIN JOKE! IF YOU REALLY NEED A WEBSITE TELLING YOU HOW TO BE “emo” YOU ARE OBVIOUSLY NOT EMO AT ALL! YOU ARE JUST A POSER! SO GET OFF THIS SITE NOW! XD i came here cuz my friend told me how ridiculously pathetic it is and they are right!
June 27th, 2007 at 11:22 am
How are you gonna compare your emo pain to the pain that Jesus felt hanging off that cross? Your a dick dude. Have your pain, but dont compare yourself to Jesus.
June 27th, 2007 at 1:37 pm
Who said Jesus? Lots of people were tortured on crosses.
Personally I was speaking of this guy Steve I once new. He said it was bad.
July 2nd, 2007 at 2:29 am
Haha. Nice poe–I mean, gloomy poem. I cried 96 tears and collected them in a black vial.
protips; sarcasm. Learn it.
July 11th, 2007 at 1:05 pm
haha made my day all these poems
the funny thing is i no of people like this
im actually ROFLMAO!
July 11th, 2007 at 7:31 pm
ur all idiots … emo kids are idiots who think that the whole world hates you… like HOLY!.. your all stupid cuz u cut ur wrists and you think nobody cares about you … like man … someone does … you just got to shut up bout your “terrible” life and look into the light to see it … OMG ur all so stupid … cutting yourself wont make it better … so stop it …. i have seen so many people i care about cry because i was dying … i will never want to see it again … and i dont want to have you go through it … i dont even know you and i realize that .. but just hear what i am saying … and just take my advice … being emo or goth or whatever you wnat to call it … it wont help … : (
July 13th, 2007 at 8:20 am
You ‘emo students’ are totally missing the point of life all together. I can’t believe that some of you think that nobody cares when they do, but it’s that you sometimes choose not to see it. That’s because you keep yourself cooped up in your room so long thinking of the cons’ instead of the pros’. Who started this whole slitting your wrist thing? I don’t think it’s something that feels nice.. No wonder your not enjoying your life!
July 25th, 2007 at 8:57 am
ohh. how i miss my dark happy place. i used to be just fine in my room sulking. but my mommy made me sit in the living room so now i color with crayons.
July 28th, 2007 at 7:10 am
hallariouse!
in a non laughable way hahaha lol
July 28th, 2007 at 9:58 pm
I love it when people make stupid comments
…i would put a smiley face, but my emo keyboard won’t let me
Great poem
July 29th, 2007 at 12:28 am
u guys hu go round shittin on emos, ur all fuktards. specially u Sart Kid, u cant even spell the word SMART.
emo is also wat ur friends felt wen u were dying, emo just means emotional. and i still cry over my friend hu is in hospital on life-support, dus that make me emo cos i fukin cry? now go do shit that u think is un emo
July 29th, 2007 at 4:37 am
:)hahaha
im dead!
July 29th, 2007 at 4:37 am
July 29th, 2007 at 6:23 am
LOL that was classic
July 30th, 2007 at 2:22 am
do peole go on here to amke fun of emos or because they reaspect emos?!
July 30th, 2007 at 9:57 pm
oh my emo..
some of the people who comment this site are so freaking STUPID
im so angry
i need to cut myself so bad before i go and cut them
especially shawn
i hate that guy
July 30th, 2007 at 9:59 pm
p.s i love the poem
July 30th, 2007 at 10:00 pm
i mean i hate it..
im so confused
August 1st, 2007 at 5:04 am
h3a. yea u rokk imabigemo ur right… first stake out where shawn livvz than ATTACKK
h3a lol
August 2nd, 2007 at 7:01 pm
i dnt get it y do ppl say stuff bout emo’s y dnt u let them b who they want 2 b? i dnt get all da swearin ur just wastin ur typin coz they dnt giv a dam wat u hav 2 say bout them. if there’s a poem lik rainbow r red n blah blah blah does dat my the person emo?? ppl these days r just soo stupid n very very jugy. n there the one’s dat need 2 get over them self’s! so do ur self’s a fav n talk bout ur self’s instend of emo’s dis n emo’s dat!!!!
August 3rd, 2007 at 7:35 am
dopplgo n her to check the commentz to see if anyone commented on their comment…
August 25th, 2007 at 8:50 am
i have no problem with Emo’s or Goths or Punks or anything cause thats what they wanna be but i’ve been called Emo heaps of times just cause i like Black and Red and listen to My Chemical Romance but i’m not depressed or nothing its cause people are just too judge mentle!
October 5th, 2007 at 12:41 am
Godd!
Your fucking annoying!
you try to sound all smart …
when your fucking not!
Like OMG!
i want to shoot you !
I want to fucking torture you!
FUCK!
i would be put behind bars if i said everything i want to fucking do to you!
October 8th, 2007 at 4:06 pm
wow its was alsome
October 18th, 2007 at 10:43 pm
I totally agree with DIE MARINA!
you talk about how much you stuffer in your emo life, if emo is emotional then why is everyone on this f- ing site so f-ing depressed, isnt emotion love and happiness as well, you talk about everything thats happened to you, like you’ve been through everything….. seems like your the posers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 18th, 2007 at 10:55 pm
besides how can anyone take emos seriously, when it seems like no 1 can give the same answer twice to what being emo actually is????
yous stole you image from other cultures, the eyeliner, dark colours, and slitting wrists from the goths and the piercings and clothes from the punks, come on is anything original????
how can you seriously say emo is a culture when 95% of you just dress dark and wear too much make up just for attention….. emos are just like those people that say that jedi is their religion!!!!!!!!!!!!
November 3rd, 2007 at 8:52 am
What does these poems means!?
sorry i cant understand…
and why almost all of you cried!?
November 6th, 2007 at 8:59 pm
i agreew with gracie
November 7th, 2007 at 10:29 pm
LMAO is ebonee North she’s a fukn up her self lil dog dat want’s things her way n is very stuben.
November 7th, 2007 at 10:30 pm
hey i dnt get wats wrong with marina i dnt think she fink’s she smart she’s just been honest n yeah hmmm u wanna shoot her. why?
November 16th, 2007 at 5:21 pm
rofl
why you wanna kill Marina
like seriously, i think i’ve seen most of her comments
why is she so bad?
ur not an emo hating chav r you…
would’nt fucking surprise me!!
fuck you you fucking cunt!!
and everyone that fucking wants to harm Marina!!
if you want me on ur side..
then send me some fucking proof that Marina is fucked up…
and no i don’t recall Marina being a smart arse or anything like wanting to kill ppl like a lil someone in this convo..
GET FUCKED !
November 16th, 2007 at 5:28 pm
so r u going to threaten me because i swore at all you fucked up cunts??
do it cunts..
this is a stupid site, it’s only for bagging emos…
…you hate Marina from reading something?
uh… smart?
maybe question her instead of tgreatening and giving her shit
ur probably some old pedo that wants to be kool so you think that hating emo is kool..
EEWWWWW !!
PEDOFILE!!
EEWWWWW
don’t rape me!!
ewww ur cock is probably all saggy….
eeewwwwww
do you RAPE ur kids?
once again…
UR A FUCKING PEDOFILE
eewwwww….
*hides beneath bed…. shaking
ROFL you so wanna rape Marina
bahaha
sorry but i think she has better things to do then pose and threaten ppl
oh and that TAI kid…
ur probably that pedos apprentise…
“EEEWWW!! MORE PEDOS!!”
November 16th, 2007 at 5:43 pm
omg
some retard deleted my comments on trying defend Marina
hey? you Marina hater….
your lucky you did’nt read my comments tehy were full on, full on enough to get deleted..
whats ur asl?
i wanna see you, i’ll show you a gun
November 16th, 2007 at 5:44 pm
my comments rr back?
goodies
lol
December 10th, 2007 at 10:26 am
********i like the poem its tight butt the bullshit drama messages have gotta go if poeple wanna be emo let em keep ur opions shut about it it’s non of ur buiessness the sooner you learn that the better *****************
December 22nd, 2007 at 4:22 pm
fuk emo haterz poem writter
December 29th, 2007 at 5:54 pm
yo i dont see what everybodys problaim with emos is i mean they rock you know!
December 29th, 2007 at 5:58 pm
emos fukking rok man
and 2 all u emo hatersout there i say go to fukking and i will see you about it there !!!
shit i need to go cut myself!
January 8th, 2008 at 10:11 pm
What I don’t get about you people who said you started to cry is that this poem isn’t even sad! Wow the fucking order was wrong big fucking deal! All you have to do is take the shit inside and it back to the dumb fuckers!!! There is absolutely no reason to cry!!!! I get the Emo=Emotion thing but come on don’t you think you’re being a little over dramatic!!?? Also there is absolutely no reason to threaten these people for their oppinions. It’s a free country people should be able to make a statement and not have to worry about getting their asses kicked! In my oppinion if you don’t like Emos ignore them!!!! If they don’t bother you you shouldn’t bother them!!!!!
February 17th, 2008 at 3:36 pm
its amazing!jk
February 26th, 2008 at 11:54 am
its all so trew…T~T cew
R.I.P. (M)
June 5th, 2008 at 5:16 pm
all u guys who rat on emos:
Go fuck ur lesbo mom in the ASSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
June 13th, 2008 at 9:49 am
I like tacos.
June 17th, 2008 at 6:16 pm
that wuz awsome i kinda like dat poem…
June 19th, 2008 at 8:07 pm
Dude, your oh-so-deep-and-full-of-meaning poetry made me cry so hard that all of my eyeliner bled, so I had to slice my wrists open to match them and also because my rich parents just don’t understand the PAIN it causes me to hve to spend so much of their money on being misunderstood
It’s so HARD to be an emo :’(
July 19th, 2008 at 1:39 am
Dude, if you peeps were actually emo you wouldn’t be hanging around a site created for the purpose of secretly making fun of emo’s, crazing on about your emo-ness. Your just contributing to the joke.
You all give emo’s a bad name anyway, you know what emo really means? Emotive Hardcore. It was used originally to describe people who liked hardcore music a long time ago, not “emotional” or whatever the shiz you all wanna-be posers call it. Be real or die a loser, learn the culture before you dye you hair, cut your freakin wrists and claim to be emo. It’s a way of life, not something you just pick up on and claim it as your title. Idiots
July 26th, 2008 at 1:46 pm
LOL so deep over a milkshake……sheesh i wonder what you’d write if you dropped your ice cream cone in the street
August 7th, 2008 at 11:58 am
Can people please learn to spell correctly, I am annoyed at peoples responses, if you are going to hate this, at least portray your hatred in a legiable way instead of ‘like dis cuz u is dissin emos’, what are you saying?! I was once an ‘emo’ and I find this quite funny, I see it as never getting an order right, which seems to happen all of the time for me, rather than an anti-emo poem that doesn’t rhyme that well.
September 2nd, 2008 at 4:02 am
I feel the pain of this poem as that same fastfood pain is shredding my insides… *click fingers repeatedly*
September 2nd, 2008 at 11:05 am
dudes why pick on the emos? why not the sk8ters orpunks or sumethin??
September 22nd, 2008 at 3:56 pm
my eye liner in running,
all over the place,
black liquid driping,
from the side of my face,
wraped in all this emotional trama,
cant any one cut out the drama?
October 5th, 2008 at 1:31 am
how do u join the website?
October 5th, 2008 at 1:33 am
hello??
October 5th, 2008 at 1:38 am
i hate u ,u hate me
lets get together and kill ur family
with a gun and a shot to there head!
were all sad there finally dead!
hmm…wonder if that will ever happen
October 5th, 2008 at 1:46 am
any1
October 30th, 2008 at 10:55 am
WE LOVE THIS WE LUST DIED LAUGHING…………………………………………………………………………………… DEAD
October 30th, 2008 at 10:56 am
WERES MY COMMIT
November 3rd, 2008 at 3:33 pm
thanx for cheering me up, my step dad is an ass, he yells at me and i cut myself, my mom crys.
November 4th, 2008 at 11:34 am
Please cheer up stuck in darkness
November 5th, 2008 at 3:39 am
Hey stuck in the dark iv been in the same as u my parents r just divorced and now i live with my dad my mom live somewhere else dont no where is me and dad is going to a bad relationship wen they was divorced he started treating me so bad and then he when gets angrey he say stuff like he said that i was an accident and tat i never ment 2 be born.so lisen 2 anastasia shes right u nn
November 5th, 2008 at 3:44 am
And thats y i cut myself but no one in my family nos
November 5th, 2008 at 11:00 am
I wish you would not cut yourself. you need to tell someone, it will be hard at first but in the end it will be worth it i know that their is someone in your family who cares.
November 5th, 2008 at 2:40 pm
No one that i no of dad always going have not seen mum 4 a long time and i stay in my room all day i no dat i have 2 stop but it is really hard 2 not wen im mostly alone and same at skool got in trouble 4 it 2 thanks anastasia it means alote 2 me and 4 u i promise that i will try 2 not cut
November 5th, 2008 at 10:36 pm
So anastasia can i ask you that are you emo or goth?
November 6th, 2008 at 1:49 am
You know how hard it is to tell someone a big secret that u have hidding 4 a long time and u just get upset and cry all day and just thinking that you are alond in this world
November 6th, 2008 at 1:53 am
Sorry 4 the bad spelling man wats wrong with me this morning
November 14th, 2008 at 1:45 pm
that was deep man